Makorori Beach

This week I was learning how to use a hook.
We had to use different sentence starters and juicy verbs and a description.
Here is my story.


Slippery rocks made our feet slip while we searched the rock pools for octopus. We didn't find any. Kauri show us a seahorse. It was black and snake-like. We didn't pick it up because we didn't want to hurt it. 

After a while we wandered further along the rocks. When I was about to pick up a rock I saw a long orange tentacle. “Octopus!” I yelled. We only got to feel the one that look like a rock. Slimy tentacles suctioned to my hands.

Lifting the heavy rocks,  we found starfish, little crabs and sea slugs. The rocks that I lifted were slippery and heavy. 


We headed back to the cars to get some lunch. We got bored so we found a hut and we made a bridge. I picked up a log and it had four huhu grubs. I picked up one and gave it to my brother. We all dared him to eat it and he did. The skin popped and guts went into his mouth.