Today for writing I did a recount. My recount was about the fights I had in lockdown with my little brother.
In my writing I used specific nouns, juicy verbs and dialogue.
I found it easy to find what recount I was going to write about.
I found it hard to create a good hook for my writing
Here is my writing.
Purple punching gloves smashed into my guts. another punch to the chest. Eli's proper punching gloves started to hurt. ”FIGHT ME!” Eli yelled. My punching gloves weren't hard enough. I punched him back in the nose and the shoulder and in response, he went super insane and punched me till I fell to the ground. I kicked him so he would get off me. Eventually mum told us it was time to stop.
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