Hot Brownie With Cream

 This week for writing, we have been learning to use imagery to describe. We had to use a simile, alliteration and juicy verbs.

It was easy for me to use a simile because we have learnt about these. It was tricky to use alliteration because I haven't used it before.

I wrote about hot brownie with cream because it's one of my favourite desserts. What is your favourite dessert or food?

Here is my piece of writing.

As I into the brownie immediately I knew it was heated to the right temperature the gooey middle oozed down my throat like tar sludging out of a funnel.

This is my success criteria

Learning Intention: We are learning to use imagery

Success Criteria	Self Assessment
I will use a simile
I will use alliteration
I will use juicy verbs