In Writing we were learning to describe. We had to use specific nouns, adjectives, juicy verbs and something else we wanted to add. I wanted to add similes. I found it tricky to use a juicy verb because there weren't many verbs to use. Next time I will ask Kharn or Morgan to help me.
Remember
the golden sandy beach and the glimmering water.
Remember
the scorching sun and the shiny paua shells washed up on the shore.
Remember the big slimy scaly fish in the rock pool with the small sea creatures.
That was summer.
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